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Awesome

Your voice is so incredibly perfect for this song. For some reason I really don't like the cello in this track. It would be a bit better with a straight quarter note guitar power chord lick. I would add a bit more punch to the section when the cello gets in. I find this is better then the original... nice work.

DUDE!

Fuck yeah! You have quenched my thirst for rock.

Alright man

I love this song... but I would play it in a higher octave, to better compliment your voice, cause sometimes it seems that you can't reach the lower notes. I would also tune up your guitar, it sounds flat to me. Very nice little solo at the end.

Hehe..

For the situations, its really awesome. I really want to hear you with some actual music behind you and a real mic. You have a great voice.

ThroughALensFlare responds:

Thanks, man! About a real mic and music, you'll have to deal with this for now, seeing as I have no music and a mic... But, I might do Free World. Maybe, I dunno. We'll see.

Another one...

This one has more of a melody thats straight forward. Nice song. You just need some backup.

ThroughALensFlare responds:

Yeah... Backup would help a lot... Thanks, though.

Jazz piano rules

Nice performance.

This rules

Way better than your other stuff. Its got a beat. And I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have this one synth however, that comes in at about 1:25. And it annoyed me very much. It didn't fit with the mood at all. I would throw in something a tad more acoustic. Great song.

Smooth

Its just that simple. But honestly I found it a bit too smooth.... you need to throw in some sugar and spice. Its a great tune, but it just bored me to death.

Its great...

But you go off the drum's beat a lot. It annoyed me a lot. If you fixed that problem, this song would kick ass.

Awesome

This song was amazing. I really enjoyed listening to it. I have a few suggestions refering to the beginning though. I would cut in the piano/synth later. Because It sounds muddled when the white noise in the beginning is at a stronger point. Also, because of all the echoes/delays you had, the sound sometimes came off as offbeat. The melody is dissonant and brilliant. Love this song.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the suggestions. Cheers.

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Lenny Keenan @LenardNotLenny

Age 29, Male

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Joined on 10/31/07

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