I am so sick of you...
This song is a bunch of loops. You added some pretty cool ambient synths on top of them, but its all Garageband loops when you boil it down.
1. The original bass lick [80s Dance Bass Synth 01]
2. The drum track at :32 [Electronic Drum Beat 02]
3. The drum track at 1:04 [Club Dance Beat 30]
4. The pad at 1:37 [80s Dance Pad 01]
If you're fine with the fact that you exert barely any creative energy thinking of your own melody, than I guess you can ignore this review. But the fact that so many people think you're the most amazing musician sickens me, when so much of your music is modified loops. So many audio artists on NG have so much more talent than you, and yet you get the limelight.
I'm sorry for being an asshole, and a nitpicker, but that's just how I feel.