Awesome
Your vocals are really awesome. My only suggestion would be maybe try to slide up and down the notes against. But this song is great, its really angry, but in a sort of given-up sense. This is great. Hoo Ra for indie NG songwriters!
Awesome
Your vocals are really awesome. My only suggestion would be maybe try to slide up and down the notes against. But this song is great, its really angry, but in a sort of given-up sense. This is great. Hoo Ra for indie NG songwriters!
wow...thanks man! I really wasn't expecting any good reviews for this quick recording, hahaha :P well, I'm glad you like it, but I don't really understand your suggestion..."slide up and down the notes against"?
in any case, the finished product will have the rest of my band included, so it should sound better :D Again, thank you sooo much for the positive review! :)
Awesome
This song has much more of an atmosphere than the rest of your songs. You can just totally zone out while listening to this. Awesome track.
Thanks, man.
Awesome
The guitar is too fuzzy and has too much overdrive. But the synths are great, and its a cool song. Keep it up.
Thanks :D
Hoo Ra for NG songwriters!
Yeah, you do have a Kimya Dawson feel... nice song... The lack of quality really adds to it.
Keep on playing man.
Thanks for the feedback. Rock on, brotha!
Awesome
This song is very cool. It really sets a great mood, and transforms brilliantly. Sometimes the backup vocals get off, but the liquidized vocals sound great. Nice job.
Sam Cashion, the one who commented below, sung lead in this song. If you liked this, you should check out his stuff.
Thanks for the review
Pretty funny...
How did give you the farting noises?
Hehe..
For the situations, its really awesome. I really want to hear you with some actual music behind you and a real mic. You have a great voice.
Thanks, man! About a real mic and music, you'll have to deal with this for now, seeing as I have no music and a mic... But, I might do Free World. Maybe, I dunno. We'll see.
Another one...
This one has more of a melody thats straight forward. Nice song. You just need some backup.
Yeah... Backup would help a lot... Thanks, though.
Awesome
This song was amazing. I really enjoyed listening to it. I have a few suggestions refering to the beginning though. I would cut in the piano/synth later. Because It sounds muddled when the white noise in the beginning is at a stronger point. Also, because of all the echoes/delays you had, the sound sometimes came off as offbeat. The melody is dissonant and brilliant. Love this song.
Thanks for the suggestions. Cheers.
Infact... I like it!
The lyrics are great. Its a great indie tune. The bass and drums rule, but the guitar kind of suck.
Thanks for your review! I can't belive you people think the lyrics are that good!
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