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Without being funny. There's hardly any animation as well.
Author's Response:
well, I just started on flash, I'll get better at it over time, I mean.... you have to practice at flash, you just can't suddenly be good at animating....
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Why does this not have a higher score? The frame by frame looks spectacular. Another charming animation Mr. Boogley.
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LENARD!! how's things? :D
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That was probably one of the least creative flashes I've seen in a while. I've already started to get sick of so many rampant tributes to Egoraptor, but this one was just sub-par. I really have no problem with a tribute, it's just, it wasn't funny, and the little humor there was stemmed from Metal Gear Awesome. There were many parts that attempted to be humorous, using MGA jokes, that in this context, weren't.
The fact that you not only didn't use your own ideas, and that they weren't that funny, is the real downfall of this flash.
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you can get the streams through the radio section anyway.
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Not these streams. Some of them are found only with paid subscription. Only one is from Itunes radio. :) That I know of.. maybe someone got it from itunes radio.
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Someone made Madness with skill. And camera angles. -gasp-
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Definitely much funnier than the second. The quality of everything else went down a ton, but the humor was actually decent. Nice work.
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree more, this episode is so much funnier than the second. For episode 3 I am going to try to make it funnier & better in quality. Thanks for the review.
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Okay, I like the style and the character design, although the backgrounds were extremely lazy... my one problem was the script. It just was not funny. At all. Before I slap your face with my penis? Were you high? The only parts that could've been maybe mildly funny were the two jokes in the morning with Green-Shirt. Except the humor style was blatantly Family Guy, in the most non-funny way possible. Also, speed up the pace. The gray-screen piano intermissions were boring and not necessary and there was un-needed space in between lines. So yeah, work on the humor. But I enjoy the concept and the foundation of laughter is still there, its just this episode's house felt like a dog-shack made of balsa wood and glue.
Author's Response:
Okay first off I would like to thank you for writing a very complete review. I agree with you on the backgrounds except for the one in the car which I rather like. As for the script, I did have some difficulties with it, mostly I just thought that it wasn't up to par with the first one. I still found it mildly funny but different person, different sense of humour I guess. Thanks for the compliment on the first two jokes by Greg ( that is Mr. Green shirt) they were the only two jokes that I had in my mind for weeks before writing. I am a huge family guy fan & I suppose I might have been unwillingly influenced. I will in no way disagree with you about the pace. I don't know what I was thinking. I will work on the humour for episode 3 which is about half written & definitly work on the backgrounds or maybe just spend more time on them.
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It got extremely repetitive. I would recommend making a different style of game. Every single one is fundamentally, exactly the same. It gets boring.
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If atheism was a retarded belief, based off a vague novel, and was a group of war-mongering love monsters, then yes, King Schmuck would be a fucking dipshit. But the only thing is... atheism has facts, and evidence supporting it. We are not a group of stupid, brainwashed, morons.
The flash was pretty bad, but slightly funny.
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I no clue what just happened. But I loved every second. Genius.
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