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Breakbeat. You didn't even use Garageband licks. You just copied a premade song.
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i did it on reason retard
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For the situations, its really awesome. I really want to hear you with some actual music behind you and a real mic. You have a great voice.
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Thanks, man! About a real mic and music, you'll have to deal with this for now, seeing as I have no music and a mic... But, I might do Free World. Maybe, I dunno. We'll see.
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This one has more of a melody thats straight forward. Nice song. You just need some backup.
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Yeah... Backup would help a lot... Thanks, though.
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Nice performance.
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Way better than your other stuff. Its got a beat. And I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have this one synth however, that comes in at about 1:25. And it annoyed me very much. It didn't fit with the mood at all. I would throw in something a tad more acoustic. Great song.
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Its just that simple. But honestly I found it a bit too smooth.... you need to throw in some sugar and spice. Its a great tune, but it just bored me to death.
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But you go off the drum's beat a lot. It annoyed me a lot. If you fixed that problem, this song would kick ass.
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This song was amazing. I really enjoyed listening to it. I have a few suggestions refering to the beginning though. I would cut in the piano/synth later. Because It sounds muddled when the white noise in the beginning is at a stronger point. Also, because of all the echoes/delays you had, the sound sometimes came off as offbeat. The melody is dissonant and brilliant. Love this song.
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Thanks for the suggestions. Cheers.
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One problem. It doesn't loop. And its a loop. Either make it a longer song or allow it to repeat smoothly.
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The lyrics are great. Its a great indie tune. The bass and drums rule, but the guitar kind of suck.
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Thanks for your review! I can't belive you people think the lyrics are that good!
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